怎樣寫英文日記 2

Sunday May 21，2003 Sunny

Going on a Picnic

　Today was Sunday. The weather was fine and warm. The sky was very clear and blue. My classmates and I were very happy， because we went out for a picnic at Nanshan Hill. We went to Nanshan Hill by bike with fruits， eggs， meat， vegetables， knives and some other things.

　About one and a half hours later， we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill. There were many beautiful flowers and green trees. Birds sang their sweet songs. How pleased we were！ Then we were busy with the picnic. Some of us were getting water， some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook， others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch. At about 13 o'clock， our lunch was ready. We all sat around on the green grass， singing， talking， eating and drinking. At about 16：00 we began packing for our return.

　What a nice time we were having！

　小作者能用準確、地道的語言，簡練的語句非常生動地描寫出了野炊的場面。這篇文章條理清楚，尤其是“ some … some … ， others …”句型，以及 singing， eating 等現在分詞作伴隨狀語的運用，使這篇日記增色不少。本文結尾使用了一個感嘆句，更加反映出小作者對這次野炊的真實情感。

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　同學們平時都有用中文寫日記的習慣吧。在學過 Lesson 78 之後，再根據我們今天“作文展廳”的講解，希望你們每天能把中文日記改用英文來書寫。因為，每天堅持寫英文日記不僅能提高你們對語言的運用能力，同時更能不斷促進和複習鞏固所學的英文知識，從而進一步提高你們的寫作水平。