高考英文寫作的七項基本原則 4
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5)附加(多此一舉)
如果把別人的話插入到我們的話裡面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影響整個句子的構成;定語從句—借用之前的關鍵字並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關鍵字必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢恢宏)
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑戰極限原則
既然是挑戰極限,必然是比較難的,但是並非不可攀!
原理:在學生的文章中,很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您寫出一些這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!