2007年高考英文滿分作文及名師評析
作者：不詳 （字數：5500字作文）
2007高考英文滿分作文
【全國卷II】
【試題回放】
一家賓館新開業，為吸引外國賓客，希望在網際網路上進行宣傳。請你用英文為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：
1.地點：距白山入口處500米;
2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放; 5.歡迎預定。
注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名師點評】
本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是套用了很多比較複雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。
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好詞 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有這些服務都會給你帶來便利，並且非常的愉快。
評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。
【安徽卷】
【試題回放】
假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：
l 表示贊成。
l 提出你喜歡的欄目。
l 簡要說明理由。
注意：
1. 詞數100左右。
2. 新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
3. 適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
4. 參考欄目：欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇滿分作文。由於這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省今年的英文作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英文，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英文，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。
比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英文能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。
【江蘇卷】
【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中國小校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。
教育部倡導學生：
u 每天鍛鍊一小時
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一輩子
請你根據以上提示，用英文準備一份發言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，並就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛鍊，談談你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、 發言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發揮。
2、 詞數：120左右。發言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
3、 參考辭彙：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
【名師點評】
本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，後一段發表觀點，典型的作文結構。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。複雜的句式是本文的特點之一。
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好詞1.wage v.發動2.aim v.瞄準3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。
評析：advocate，其後接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態動詞。
2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
如果我們不進行運動，我們的學習成績就不會很好。
評析：虛擬語氣。
【重慶卷】
【試題回放】
據報導，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)後處於極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。
假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：
自我介紹
得知的情況
表示鼓勵
打算為她做什麼
祝她早日康復
注意：
1. 信的格式已為你寫好
2. 信中不得出現你的真實情況。
3. 詞數100左右。
4. 請在答題卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點評]
本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。
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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈
好句1. I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.
我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。
好處：which引導限制性定語從句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，堅強地與疾病做鬥爭吧!
好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。